I have been working on text to deal with parties and allowed business uses as outlined in Aleecia's revised template.  So far I have a draft that addresses the first part of the template -- Issue-10, What is a first party?Issue-17, Data use by 1st Party,  Issue-19, Data collection / Data use (3rd party). It is attached as an RTF file and is also in the body of this email below.  I  expect to have ideas about permitted uses later today or tomorrow at the latest.