The edits look good to me as well +1
Thank you,
Sharon Snider
IBM Hybrid Cloud ► IBM Accessibility Leadership Team
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From: Becky Gibson <>
To: John Foliot <>
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Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: Draft Edit: We need personalization because...
Date: Tue, Nov 26, 2019 2:20 PM
Those edits look good to me, John.  Thanks for working on those edits.
On Nov 26, 2019, at 10:39 AM, John Foliot <> wrote:
Greetings All,
After our call yesterday, I took the opportunity to go back and try my hand on an editorial edit to the Explainer page. My suggested edits can be found at:
For the group's consideration.
John Foliot | Principal Accessibility Strategist | W3C AC Representative
Deque Systems - Accessibility for Good