The edits look good to me as well +1
 
Thank you,
Sharon Snider
IBM Hybrid Cloud ► IBM Accessibility Leadership Team
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----- Original message -----
From: Becky Gibson <becky@knowbility.org>
To: John Foliot <john.foliot@deque.com>
Cc: public-personalization-tf <public-personalization-tf@w3.org>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: Draft Edit: We need personalization because...
Date: Tue, Nov 26, 2019 2:20 PM
 
Those edits look good to me, John.  Thanks for working on those edits.
 
-becky
 
On Nov 26, 2019, at 10:39 AM, John Foliot <john.foliot@deque.com> wrote:
 
Greetings All,
 
After our call yesterday, I took the opportunity to go back and try my hand on an editorial edit to the Explainer page. My suggested edits can be found at:
https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/wiki/We-need-personalization-because
 
For the group's consideration.
 
JF 
 
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