- From: Ben Laurie <ben@algroup.co.uk>
- Date: Fri, 31 May 1996 18:16:21 +0100
- To: HTTP Working Group <http-wg%cuckoo.hpl.hp.com@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Still working my way through the beast but here's what has emerged so
far:
Section 1.3
Under 'semantically transparent':
'When a client makes a request via a semantically transparent cache, it
would receive...'
should read:
'When a client makes a request via a semantically transparent cache, it
will receive...'
Or some other form where the tenses agree.
Section 2.1
'#(element)' should be '#element'.
Section 2.2
Although it is obvious, the notation '"a".."z"' has not been defined.
Should tspecials include "#"?
'qdtext = <any TEXT except <"> and CTLs,
but including LWS>'
should read
'qdtext = <any TEXT except <"> and CTLs>'
Section 3.1
'MUST never send a message with a version indicator which is greater
than its actual version;'
but, above, the term 'native version' is defined, and not the term
'actual version'.
Cheers,
Ben (Apache Group member).
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Received on Friday, 31 May 1996 10:11:56 UTC