RE: Minor edits to Developer Modules" (https://wai-curricula.netlify.app/curricula/developer-modules/)

Hello Vicki,

 

Many thanks for providing this feedback.

 

See my comments below as [Daniel].

And preview at:

https://deploy-preview-320--wai-curricula.netlify.app/curricula/developer-modules/page-structure/

 

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From: Victoria Menezes Miller <menezesmiller@gmail.com> 
Sent: Monday, February 1, 2021 3:14 PM
To: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Subject: Minor edits to Developer Modules" (https://wai-curricula.netlify.app/curricula/developer-modules/)

 

Dear Editors,

 

Go to page: https://wai-curricula.netlify.app/curricula/developer-modules/ 

1. The link to Module 1 is broken.

2. The link to Module 5 is broken.

[Daniel] These are now updated to the relative URL approach that we should be using.

 

Go to page:  <https://wai-curricula.netlify.app/curricula/foundation-modules/business-case-and-benefits/> https://wai-curricula.netlify.app/curricula/foundation-modules/business-case-and-benefits/

 

1. Heading:  "Teaching ideas for topics"

- First bullet point: "Introduce case studies of organizations who have adopted accessibility

  Should the wording be "organizations that have" or "organizations which have* instead of "organizations who have".

[Daniel] Corrected.

 

- Last bullet point of this set of bullets, is the word "up" possibly missing after "brought" in the following sentence:

"Refer to specific legal cases related to accessibility and present their settlements or outcomes. Find cases that were both upheld as well as dismissed to determine the reasons for the outcome and explore why the case was brought."

[Daniel] Corrected.

 

2. Heading:  "Ideas to Assess Knowledge for Topic".

 

In the first bullet point, the past tense should be introduced in the second sentence at the word "design":  so, replace the phrase "originally design for" with "originally designed for".

Practice — Students perform a specific task with the virtual assistant in their mobile phones. For example, students read the news, query the weather, or check items into a shopping cart. Assess students’ capacity to recognize innovation behind features originally designed for accessibility that many people use nowadays.

 

[Daniel] Corrected.

 

3. Under the heading "Ideas to Assess Knowledge" 

I'm not sure if capital letters are absolutely necessary on "F" and "A" in the words "Functionality Available" in the last bullet point, in the following sentence: "For example, Functionality Available from the Keyboard belongs to the principle Operable and helps keyboard users as well as people using voice recognition software."

[Daniel] This is a subheading in

https://www.w3.org/WAI/fundamentals/accessibility-principles/#keyboard

I have now removed capitalization and used quotes instead. 

 

Kind regards,

 

V. Menezes Miller

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Daniel Montalvo

 

Accessibility Education and Training Specialist

W3C/WAI