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http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part0/ errata

From: <raf@raf.org>
Date: Wed, 16 Oct 2013 00:43:53 +0000
To: xmlp-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <20131016004322.GA28203@raf.org>
Hi,

Here are some minor typographical/grammatical errors
in the SOAP 1.2 primer.

Section 1, paragraph 6
Section 4, paragraph 11
Example 9, caption
Example 10, caption
Example 13, caption

 Inconsistent indefinite article use with "HTTP".
 These paragraphs and captions use "an HTTP".
 There are 5 uses of "an HTTP" altogether
 in this document and 26 uses of "a HTTP".

Setion 1, paragraph 6
Section 5.3, paragraph 2

 Incorrect number agreement(?): "for certain type of content"
 should either be "for certain types of content" or
 "for a certain type of content" depending on which is meant.

Section 1, paragraph 7

 Missing space character in "[XOP]defines".
 The surrounding paragraphs have a space between their corresponding
 references and the word "defines" or "describes".

Section 4.1, paragraph 1

 Incorrect tense: "can chose" should be "can choose".

Regards,
raf
Received on Monday, 2 December 2013 10:29:17 UTC

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