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comments on SOAP 1.2 03-06-24

From: Yuxiao Zhao <yuxzh@ida.liu.se>
Date: Sun, 21 Sep 2003 08:20:37 -0400 (EDT)
Message-Id: <200309211220.h8LCKY9C018084@portofix.ida.liu.se>
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I don't know if other people have mentioned these things:

1. Example 5 in SOAP 1.2 part 1:
xmlns:ns2="http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/soap/envelope/" should be no last "/".

2. In 2.1, SOAP 1.2 part 0:
"The choice of what data is placed in a header block and what goes in the SOAP 
body are decisions taken at the time of application design."
 It may be better to change "choice" into "choices" and "taken" into "made".
 
3. In 2.2.1, SOAP1.2 part 0:
"The message exchange in Examples 1 and 2 are cases where XML-based content 
conforming to some application-defined schema are exchanged via SOAP messages."
 It may be better to change "exchange" into exchanges" and "content" into 
"contents".
 
4. I wonder if the specifications should conventionally keep unity in using " 
and ' in one example and/or all examples, for instance, 
- in part 0, example 7 uses "<?xml version="1.0">" while other examples use 
"<?xml version='1.0'>"
- in part 0, example 6a uses "" for xmlns:env but '' for xmlns:rpc.
- in part 1, examples 6 & 7 use "" for xml version but '' for others.
	

Regards

Yuxiao Zhao
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