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Comments XML Enc Req 20011018, numbering

From: Stefan Schumacher <stefan@duckflight.de>
Date: Sun, 11 Nov 2001 21:13:21 +0100
To: reagle@w3.org
CC: xml-encryption@w3.org
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Im translating the WD XML Enc Req at the moment, and have a 
few suggestions. A copy and paste from "my-errata" follows.


now, for example:

3. Requirements
  1. Encryption Data Model and Syntax

like in other specifications or the core spec:

3. Requirements
3.1. Encryption Data Model and Syntax

It would be easier to navigate in the document.


Section 2, 1. The XML ... :

is now:
represent a digitally encrypted Web resource 

represent a digitally encrypted resource 


Im still at the beginning of the translation, maybe theres more to 

Hope, it helps.

Best regards,

Stefan Schumacher
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