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Comments XML Enc Req 20011018, numbering

From: Stefan Schumacher <stefan@duckflight.de>
Date: Sun, 11 Nov 2001 21:13:21 +0100
To: reagle@w3.org
CC: xml-encryption@w3.org
Message-ID: <3BEEE9F1.1714.5575802@localhost>
Hello,

Im translating the WD XML Enc Req at the moment, and have a 
few suggestions. A copy and paste from "my-errata" follows.

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Numbering:
now, for example:

3. Requirements
  1. Encryption Data Model and Syntax


like in other specifications or the core spec:

3. Requirements
3.1. Encryption Data Model and Syntax

It would be easier to navigate in the document.

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Section 2, 1. The XML ... :

is now:
represent a digitally encrypted Web resource 

better?
represent a digitally encrypted resource 

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Im still at the beginning of the translation, maybe theres more to 
come.

Hope, it helps.

Best regards,
Stefan


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