XML specification grammar issue

To whom it may concern,

	In the XML 1.0 Specification Third Edition, first paragraph of section 2.10, 
the following sentence is used:

'On the other hand, "significant" white space that should be preserved in the 
delivered version is common, for example in poetry and source code.'

I believe this should be something along the lines of:

'On the other hand, if it is common for the delivered version to contain 
"significant" white space (poetry or source code for example), then it should 
be preserved'

Please feel free to change it accordingly.

Sincerely,
Chris White