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>Dear Sirs,
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>ERRATA (possible):
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>location:
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>Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Third Edition)
>W3C Recommendation 04 February 2004
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>Section 4 Physical Structures (Definition of unparsed entity: 3d sentence of definition)
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>AND THE SAME
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>Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.1
>W3C Recommendation 04 February 2004, edited in place 15 April 2004
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>Section   4 Physical Structures     (Definition of unparsed entity: 3d sentence of definition)
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>Sentence:
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>Beyond a requirement that an XML processor make the identifiers for the entity and notation available to the application, XML places no constraints on the contents of unparsed entities.
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>Planned structure of this sentense:
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>Beyond  (some constraint on Content), XML places no (another constraints on Contents).
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>But:
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>1.    "...identifiers for the entity and notation..." DO NOT constitute part of or whole content of unparsed entity; identifiers ARE external objects relatively content of unparsed entity.
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>2.    so, "...a requirement that an XML processor make the identifiers for the entity and notation available to the application..." IS NOT constraint on the contents of unparsed entities.
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>3.    so, whole sentence is semantically incorrect.
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>Best Regards,
>Valeri Remeev
>val_remeev@hotpop.com
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