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Re: Updated soap12-part3

From: <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>
Date: Tue, 5 Sep 2006 19:58:59 -0400
To: "David Orchard" <dorchard@bea.com>
Cc: xml-dist-app@w3.org
Message-ID: <OF9C1CB972.C091A1FB-ON852571E0.0083349F-852571E0.0083BE9F@lotus.com>

Dave:  thanks for doing this.  Mostly it looks good.  A few small issues.

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I noticed one typo, which may in fact trace to a copy paste from something 
I wrote:

"The XML Protocols Workgroup solicits feedback on the question of whether 
this MEP should indeed provide support for transmission to more than one 
receiver, as described in this draft, or whether it should speak only of a 
single sender, a single receive, and a single message."

That should be "a single receiver".

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I also noticed one other detail that probably survives from a long time 
ago, but which I'd like to see discussed after FWD is out:

"A receiver MAY fault in a binding-specific manner if some particular 
message is declared in error "

I'm not sure the use of the word "declared" is right, as it suggests that 
someone needs to craft some sort of error declaration.  Perhaps:

"A receiver MAY fault in a binding-specific manner if some particular 
message is found to be in error "

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Another one to discuss after the FWD:

"Such failures might be silent at either or all of the sending and 
recieving SOAP nodes involved, or might result in the generation of a SOAP 
or binding-specific fault (see 2.4 Fault Handling)."

Should that be:

"Such failures MAY be silent at either or all of the sending and recieving 
SOAP nodes involved, or MAY result in the generation of a SOAP or 
binding-specific fault (see 2.4 Fault Handling)."

I thought we avoided informal conformance rules expressed with constructs 
like lowercase "might".


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I think the typo is worth fixing ASAP.  The others can be discussed later 
if anyone thinks it's worth the trouble.  Thanks.

Noah




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"David Orchard" <dorchard@bea.com>
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08/30/2006 06:54 PM
 
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        Subject:        Updated soap12-part3



I've published a new version at
http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/6/soap12-part3

Cheers,
Dave
Received on Tuesday, 5 September 2006 23:59:25 GMT

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