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Re: Proposal for Rec36

From: <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>
Date: Thu, 6 Oct 2005 08:21:16 -0400
To: Hervé Ruellan <herve.ruellan@crf.canon.fr>
Cc: xml-dist-app@w3.org
Message-ID: <OFE93E968A.2D61A9B0-ON85257092.0043831F-85257092.0043DDB5@lotus.com>

Hervé:  thank you for drafting this.  Generally I like it, but I have a 
proposed edit that both corrects a small typo and also changes the sense a 
bit:

<HervéProposal>
Note that this assume that the [children] of the element information item 
to be optimized contains only character information items.
</HervéProposal>
<suggestedEdit>
Note that this rule requires that the [children] of the element 
information item to be optimized contains only character information 
items.
</suggestedEdit>

Reasons:
* I don't really think we're assuming it.  We're saying:  "if there is 
something other than character children, you can't optimize"
* In any case, I think "assume" needs to be "assumes", since "this" is 
singular

Otherwise, I think this is a fine resolution to the issue.  Thank you.

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Hervé Ruellan <herve.ruellan@crf.canon.fr>
Sent by: xml-dist-app-request@w3.org
10/03/2005 11:28 AM
 
        To:     xml-dist-app@w3.org
        cc:     (bcc: Noah Mendelsohn/Cambridge/IBM)
        Subject:        Proposal for Rec36



Dear all,

This is a proposal for solving the issue raised in [1] (which will 
become issue Rec36 as soon as the table is updated).

To remove any possible ambiguity from the 3rd bullet of section 3.1 
Creating XOP Packages from the XOP specification [2], I propose changing 
the current wording :

<current>
3. Identify within the Original XML Infoset the element information 
items to be optimized. To be optimized, the characters comprising the 
[children] of the element information item MUST be in the canonical form 
of xs:base64Binary (see [XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes Second 
Edition]3.2.16 base64Binary) and MUST NOT contain any whitespace 
characters, preceding, inline with or following the non-whitespace 
content.
</current>

<updated>
3. Identify within the Original XML Infoset the element information 
items to be optimized. To be optimized, the characters comprising the 
[children] of the element information item MUST be in the canonical form 
of xs:base64Binary (see [XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes Second 
Edition]3.2.16 base64Binary) and MUST NOT contain any whitespace 
characters, preceding, inline with or following the non-whitespace 
content. Note that this assume that the [children] of the element 
information item to be optimized contains only character information 
items.
</updated>

The second paragraph of 2.3.1 Sending a message of the MTOM 
specification [3] would be updated in the same manner.

Best regards,

Hervé.


[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xmlp-comments/2005Aug/0004.html
[2] 
http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/3/06/Attachments/XOP.html#creating_xop_packages

[3] http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/REC-soap12-mtom-20050125/#aof-sending
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