RE: The SOAP Primer (Part 0)

My mail was meant strictly as a complement. The first primer I read made
me very sad, as it propagated a bunch of stuff that isn't really there.

This one is clean, to the point, and in my mind tells a wonderful story
around a very wonderful protocol.

Thanks so much for taking the time to make this great.

DB


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Nilo Mitra (EUS) [mailto:Nilo.Mitra@am1.ericsson.se]
> Sent: Tuesday, May 13, 2003 2:45 PM
> To: Don Box; xml-dist-app@w3.org
> 
> Hi Don:
> Please see inlined response.
> 
>  > From: Don Box [mailto:dbox@microsoft.com]
> 
> <snip>
> 
>  > In reading section 2.2 (and 2.2.1), the prose is so close to
>  > perfect, but there's something about it that I wonder about.
> 
> Thanks. (I assume this is a compliment ;-))
> 
>  >
>  > The section uses the term "XML document" to refer to the
>  > body content of an envelope.
>  >
> 
> <snip>
> 
>  > Perhaps the primer could use the term "XML-based content"
>  > instead of XML document?
> 
> OK. There are three occurences of the phrase "XML document" in the
> referenced sections,
> and in each case your proposed suggestion fits well. I'll make the
changes
> in the next
> version.
> 
> Thanks for reading the Primer - again.
> 
>  >
>  > DB
>  >
> 
> Nilo
> 
> Nilo Mitra
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