- From: Christopher Ferris <chris.ferris@sun.com>
- Date: Wed, 10 Oct 2001 15:44:57 -0400
- To: xml-dist-app@w3.org
Nilo, Some comments on the Primer draft. Cheers, Chris - With regards to the following: Part 1 of the SOAP 1.2 specifications defines the SOAP envelope, ... It also defines a transport binding framework, which describes the way by which a SOAP message may be carried as the payload of another protocol. Suggested replacement text: Part 1 of the SOAP 1.2 specifications defines the SOAP envelope, ... It also defines a transport binding framework, which describes a framework for the specification of a binding of SOAP onto another underlying protocol such as HTTP, SMTP, etc. - With regards to the following: It is fundamentally a stateless, one-way message exchange paradigm... I think that "It" needs to be qualified. I believe that the "It" here refers to SOAP, not the XML Document of the previous sentence. Suggested replacement text: SOAP is fundamentally a ... - With regards to section 1.2 Notational Conventions. Is it customary to include reference to RFC2119 in a non-normative document such as the primer? I note that the XMLSchema Primer does not do so...
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