Comments for WD-xinclude-20031110

Hello,

These are just quick minor editorial comments for the XInclude Last
Call [1] references sections.

1. The editors' names are links. The title of the work should really be
the link instead. Dominique Hazaël-Massieux wrote a Bibliography
Extractor [2] that might help, and the Manual of Style has an example
entry [3].

2. Also I wondered why Unicode Version 3.2 is cited by number. The
Unicode Consortium has citation guidelines near the bottom of [4].

3. The IRI Internet-Draft's title (rather than its URI) should be the
link.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-xinclude-20031110/
[2] http://www.w3.org/2002/01/tr-automation/tr-biblio-ui
[3] http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#ref-section
[4] http://www.unicode.org/unicode/standard/versions/

Happy New Year and best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch           http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/
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