RE: Comments for WD-xinclude-20010516

Thank you for these comments.  They will all be incorporated into the
specification.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Susan Lesch [mailto:lesch@w3.org] 
> Sent: Saturday, May 19, 2001 8:53 PM
> To: www-xml-xinclude-comments@w3.org
> Subject: Comments for WD-xinclude-20010516
> 
> 
> These are comments for your XInclude Last Call Working Draft 
> [1]. It is beautifully written.
> 
> You might consider using divs rather than tables for 
> examples. The editors of XML Schema Part 1-3 do this; (see 
> http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/). In your case, there would 
> be no need to nest divs. One-column tables are of relatively 
> minor concern but they seem to go against Web content 
> accessibility guideline 3; (see 
> http://www.w3.org/TR/WAI-WEBCONTENT/#gl-structure-presentation).
> 
> Globally, XML Schema -> XML schema (unless referring to the 
> name of the W3C schema specification)
> 
> Below a section name or number is followed by a quote and 
> then a suggestion.
> 
> Abstract
> URI References
> URI references (unless referring to the BNF itself in RFC 
> 2396, in which case it would be URI-Reference)
> 
> Status of this document par. 1
> Last Call working draft
> Last Call Working Draft (to match the W3C Process Document, see
> http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/)
> 
> Status par. 4
> XML Activity Statement.
> XML Activity statement.
> 
> 3. par. 1
> refered
> referred
> 
> 3. href
> URI Reference
> URI reference
> 
> spec is a little informal; I'd say:
> specification
> 
> 4.2.1 Note
> whitespace (twice)
> white space (if you want to follow XML 1.0, see
> http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#sec-white-space)
> 
> 4.4.1 par. 3 and 4.4.2 par. 3
> useage
> usage
> 
> 5.2 list item 1
> XML Namespaces
> XML namespaces, or Namespaces in XML
> 
> A. Unicode
> Standard.(See
> Standard. (See
> 
> A. XML
>      Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, and C.M. Sperberg-McQueen, editors.
>      Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0. World Wide Web Consortium,
>      1998.
> could read:
>      Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, C.M. Sperberg-McQueen, and Eve 
> Maler, editors.
>      Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Second Edition). World Wide
>      Web Consortium, 1998.
> 
> A. XML Names
> "Textuality, Hewlett-Packard, and Microsoft." can be omitted.
> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-xinclude-20010516/
> 
> Best wishes for your project,
> -- 
> Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org  tel:+1.858.483.4819
> World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/
> 
>

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