[Bug 11228] minor editorial improvement : definition of particles

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=11228

C. M. Sperberg-McQueen <cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com> changed:

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--- Comment #2 from C. M. Sperberg-McQueen <cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com> 2011-01-12 03:55:07 UTC ---

Proposal:  in section 3.9.2, replace the paragraph 

    Particles correspond to all three elements (<element> not
    immediately within <schema>, <group> not immediately within
    <schema> and <any>) which allow minOccurs and maxOccurs
    attributes. These in turn correspond to two components in each
    case, a particle and its {term}. The appropriate mapping is
    described in XML Representation of Element Declaration Schema
    Components (§3.3.2), XML Representation of Model Group Schema
    Components (§3.8.2) and XML Representation of Wildcard Schema
    Components (§3.10.2) respectively.

with the paragraph 

    Particles in the schema correspond to several different kinds of
    element information items that can bear minOccurs and maxOccurs
    attributes in the schema document:

      - Local <element>, see XML Representation of Element
        Declaration Schema Components (§3.3.2)

      - Model groups <all>, <sequence>, and <choice>, see XML
        Representation of Model Group Schema Components (§3.8.2)

      - Group references <group>, see XML Representation of Model
        Group Definition Schema Components (§3.7.2)

      - Wildcard <any>, see XML Representation of Wildcard Schema
        Components (§3.10.2)

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Received on Wednesday, 12 January 2011 03:55:10 UTC