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[Bug 5137] small editorial changes sections 0-2

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Date: Mon, 08 Oct 2007 14:37:40 +0000
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           Summary: small editorial changes sections 0-2
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: johnarwe@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


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"These changes may help minimize confusion between the assertions defined here
and the assert and report elements of Schematron, which can still be used in
<appinfo> elements, or separately."
to: "These changes may help minimize confusion between the assertions defined
here and Schematron's assert and report elements.  The XSDL assertions facility
and Schematron can be used together or independently."

1.1 Introduction to Version 1.1
"including the XML transfer syntax for schemas itself."
no idea what you are talking about with XML transfer syntax 

1.2 Purpose
"The purpose of XML Schema Definition Language: Structures is to define the
nature of !! and their component parts,"
fix !!

2.2 XSDL Abstract Data Model
"There are 14 kinds of component" counting bullets I get 15.

2.2 XSDL Abstract Data Model
"The name [Definition:]  Component covers all the different kinds of component
defined"
All occurrences of "component" between the definition of "schema component" and
this point should be changed to "schema component", or this definition should
be moved to immediately follow the def for "schema component".  In either case,
"kinds of component" in this def should be changed to "kinds of schema
component" so the definition is not recursive.

2.2 XSDL Abstract Data Model
from: "they are not independent of their context"
to:   "they are       dependent on their context"
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