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[Bug 5072] minor editorial issues

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Date: Wed, 26 Sep 2007 00:03:56 +0000
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           Summary: minor editorial issues
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: Macintosh
               URL: http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-xmlschema11-1-20070830/
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: xan.gregg@jmp.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org

I hope these are minor enough that putting them all in one bug will not be a
problem for the WG.

1.2: "!!" appears, presumably as a placeholder.

1.3.3: There is a space in two of the URL patterns between "/vX.Y" and "Ne".
The HTML source contains "<var> N</var>"

2.2: Should "component" be plural in "14 kinds of component in all"? I know
there are situations that call of singular and others that call for plural. A space is missing after the "G" in "A model group Gis said"

2.2: A line begins with a comma: ", then the ·actual value· of the
targetNamespace [attribute] of the ancestor ..."

3.3.5: "If and only if and only if"
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