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XML schema draft comments: pt.1 3.11.1 editorial - various

From: Daniel Barclay <daniel@fgm.com>
Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 11:12:05 -0400
Message-ID: <40D06345.2080405@fgm.com>
To: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org

Regarding the draft at
http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/:

Section 3.11.1 says:

   Not just attribute values, but also element content and
   combinations of values and content can be declared to be unique;

The comma is imbalanced.  That should be:

   Not just attribute values, but also element content and
   combinations of values and content, can be declared to be unique;

(or the original comma could be removed).


The text also says:

   These constraints are specified along side ..., i.e. something
   declared as of type integer may also serve as a key.

The "i.e." should have a comma after it.  (The specification
frequently includes the comma, but such commas are missing in
several other places too.)

Also, I think "alongside" is one word.


Daniel
Received on Wednesday, 16 June 2004 11:12:38 UTC

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