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minor comments for PR-xlink-20001220

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 12 Jan 2001 22:47:06 -0800
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To: www-xml-linking-comments@w3.org
Cc: w3t-comm@w3.org
Congratulations on your XLink Proposed Recommendation [1].
It looks really nice. Here are just a few minor editorial
comments.

thead, tbody (both optional elements), and rowspan="1" colspan="1"
can be deleted from the tables in 4.1 and 4.2 to save about 2k in
overall file size. You could add cellpadding="5" or so to make
those two tables more readable.

In 1. last list item, stylesheets -> style sheets

In A.1, XML Names, "Textuality, Hewlett-Packard, and Microsoft."
can be omitted.

As it is normative in section 3, in A.2 IETF RFC 2119 can be a
normative reference.

In A.2 XIS, I imagine you will update the editors and date.

In A.2 XLREQ, "Brown University. Seekonk:" can be omitted.

In A.2 XLDP, "Seekonk:" can be omitted.

In A.2 XPTR, "Metacode Technologies, Brown University, and Sun
Microsystems. Burlington, Seekonk, et al.:" can be omitted.

(What is "Seekonk"?)

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/PR-xlink-20001220/

Best wishes for your project,

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Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org  tel:+1.858.483.4819
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