Fwd: XML POinter Language Version 1 (June 7th, 2000)

>Date: Thu, 06 Jul 2000 16:58:38 -0400
>From: Jeffrey Bacon <Jeffrey.Bacon@canada.sun.com>
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>To: Eve.Maler@East.Sun.COM
>Subject: XML POinter Language Version 1 (June 7th, 2000)
>
>Eve --
>
>I have just finished reading the Candidate Recommendation for XPointer
>dated 7 June 2000 and found a couple editorial errors.
>
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>| 1 |
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>Section 5.4.2 string-range() Function, example 2:
>         ... the following expression returns ... from the start of the 
> string)
>in the third occurrence...
>         Example Given: string-range(//P,"Thomas Pynchon",8,0)[17]
>
>Shouldn't the [17] be [3] ?
>
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>| 2 |
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>Section 5.4.2 string-range() Function, example 3:
>         ... Alternatively this could be specified as follows:
>         (this referring to the above example)
>         string-range(string-range(//P,"Thomas Pynchon")[17],"P",1,0)
>
>Again, shouldn't the [17] be [3] ?
>
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>| 3 |
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>Section 5.4.6 unique Predicate Function
>         paragraph 2 beneath the count()=1 example:
>         ... set of smaller locations, as opposed to the range the covers the
>same total...
>
>Shouldn't it be written (range THE covers -> range THAT covers):
>         ... set of smaller locations, as opposed to the range that covers the
>same total...
>
>--
>Jeffrey Bacon
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