- From: Daniel Veillard <Daniel.Veillard@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 7 Jun 2000 15:10:19 +0200
- To: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
- Cc: www-xml-linking-comments@w3.org
Susan,
thanks for your comments. I checked the most recent version
(member only) http://www.w3.org/XML/Group/2000/04/xlink-20000404.html
and all the suggested changes seems to have been incorporated.
Daniel
On Sat, Feb 26, 2000 at 03:29:22AM -0800, Susan Lesch wrote:
> Here are a few comments on your XLink last call Working Draft [1]
> "work in progress."
>
> In 2. par. 5, "don't" could read "do not". ("Don't" is perhaps a bit
> colloquial for a formal spec.)
>
> In 1. par. 4 list item 5, "stylesheets" could read "style sheets".
>
> "XLink-namespace" appears six times. I don't know if that should be
> hyphenated (as is) or be two words.
>
> "Namespaces Recommendation [XNAME]" appears five times. I'm not
> certain if that should read "namespaces Recommendation [XNAME]"
> (normal capitalization as far as I know), "Namespaces in XML
> Recommendation [XNAME]" (the title), or if it is correct as is.
>
> Some of the examples use registered domains (me.com, somewhere.org,
> and an.org). You could consider the safer IANA-registered
> example.com, example.net, and example.org which are reserved for
> examples. (See RFC 2606 section 3 at
> http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2606.txt.)
>
> In 3.4 par. 3, "must be receive" could read "must receive".
>
> In 3.5 par. 1, "locator" could read "locator-".
>
> Reference:
> [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/WD-xlink-20000221/
>
> Best wishes,
> --
> Susan Lesch
> susan@textet.com
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