In the "Status of Document" section, para 1, the following sentence needs to be deleted: The XHTML <del> tag is used to indicate previous text, where the <ins> tag indicates newly added (or modified) text. In the same section different para starting with: " The purpose of a W3C CR ..." must be put in past tense. In the same section, last para, starting with "Publication as a CR ...." must be changed too. 1.2 Acknowledgements: Looks like my employer name needs to be prefixed with (formerly Sun Microsystems Inc) and similarly for Stephen Farrell. Do you think I should make these changes? If you are making changes, I would actually make them in the pre-PR draft version with <ins> and <del> tags so that all changes are correctly captured. /Shivaram Shivaram Mysore <shivarammysore@yahoo.com> wrote: Jose, I would also remove the granual date wise change log in Appendix E and just retain "Specification Changes between PR & CR" Section. /Shivaram Jose Kahan <jose.kahan@w3.org> wrote: Hi! The file didn't get mirrored. I fixed it. On Fri, Apr 01, 2005 at 06:45:36PM +0200, Jose Kahan wrote: > > [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Drafts/XKMS-PR-PUB/PR-PUB-xkms-part-1.html -- Secure Web Services, PKI, Software Architecture, Java, Product Strategy and Management Consultant: http://www.geocities.com/shivarammysore/ -- Secure Web Services, PKI, Software Architecture, Java, Product Strategy and Management Consultant: http://www.geocities.com/shivarammysore/Received on Monday, 4 April 2005 15:17:40 GMT
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