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more comments on the spec dated 13 Feb 2003

From: Shivaram Mysore <Shivaram.Mysore@Sun.COM>
Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2003 09:55:54 -0800 (PST)
Message-Id: <200303261755.h2QHttf12070@ha1sca-mail1.SFBay.Sun.COM>
To: www-xkms@w3.org


Part 1:
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line no: description


2:  s/proposed/
    s/an anticipated/a

20: Schema URI in the table - what is the impact on the latest schema spec

21:  Code snippet - fix content for <documentation /> tag

25: a reference to a definition of Trust, Trust Policy, Trust Model & Trust
	Management would be very useful.  The best is to write a sentence
	regarding the same.
	
64: 2nd bullet <SignedInfo>/<CanonicalizationMethod> - Fix font and possibly
	replace "/" in the above with something readable.
	
190: use of words/phrases - policy, implications of policy - may be suggesting
	this as a example for future would be more appropriate.  Also defining
	policy is more useful.
	Also in the same line, s/usekeywith/<UseKeyWith>
	
318: similar comments as 190


Part 2:
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1.  update copyright year
2:  same comment as in part 1 line 2





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