303 Denis Pinkas: 8. The two overviews from sections 1.5 and 1.6 do not provide a clear picture of the functions that are supported. They should be both revised.> A text is proposed as an annex at the end of these comments. Resolution - Editorial - some text to be merged On this one I found myself thinking that the intro could perhaps be improved BUT I think the proposals made by Denis are somewhat clearer in some respects but are also wrong. So basically I think we can move ahead without making changes here unless someone wants to volunteer to do a rewrite. PhillReceived on Wednesday, 6 August 2003 10:41:04 GMT
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