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RE: Remaining issues

From: Hallam-Baker, Phillip <pbaker@verisign.com>
Date: Wed, 6 Aug 2003 07:41:03 -0700
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303 Denis Pinkas: 8. 

The two overviews from sections 1.5 and 1.6 do not provide a clear 
picture of the functions that are supported. They should be both revised.> A

text is proposed as an annex at the end of these comments.

Resolution - Editorial - some text to be merged 

On this one I found myself thinking that the intro could perhaps be improved
BUT I think the proposals made by Denis are somewhat clearer in some
respects but are also wrong.

So basically I think we can move ahead without making changes here unless
someone wants to volunteer to do a rewrite.

        Phill
Received on Wednesday, 6 August 2003 10:41:04 GMT

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