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Comments on Web Services Architecture, Working Draft 8 Aug 2003

From: Rathnakumar Kayyar <rkayyar@WSSPL.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Nov 2003 18:31:07 +0530
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To: "'www-wsa-comments@w3.org'" <www-wsa-comments@w3.org>


Some mistakes (mainly grammatical)  I saw while going through. Hope this
helps:

1.6.2, para below Fig 2: "..that is where the all the data.."- sentence
 not proper.

1.7, lines below Fig 3: "..describes the format SOAP messages.." [of
missing]

1.7 (2nd para before 2.0) "..is much much clearly..." [much more?]

3.13 4th Para "...between Web service requestors, providers..." [..and
providers would read better]

3.14 3rd Para : "...That is be the role of..."

Thanks,
rk
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