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Re: additional meps note updated

From: Jean-Jacques Moreau <jean-jacques.moreau@crf.canon.fr>
Date: Tue, 27 Feb 2007 12:46:17 +0100
To: "Amelia A. Lewis" <alewis@tibco.com>
Cc: "'WSD Public'" <www-ws-desc@w3.org>
Message-id: <45E41A09.8040802@crf.canon.fr>

Looks good to me overall.

Maybe you could copy&paste/adapt the Abstract and Intro from Part1, as 
was done recently in Part2 (CRxxx), to bring even more uniformity 
between the different documents.

JJ.

Amelia A. Lewis wrote:
>
> Heylas,
>
> I've just updated the additional meps document, incorporating all the 
> feedback which I received (from Tom Jordahl, Jean-Jacques Moreau, and 
> Jonathan Marsh; if your name isn't there but you had some corrections, 
> please forward them to me again and accept my apologies for losing 
> track of them).
>
> Could someone more familiar with the build system regenerate the HTML? 
> This may address Tom's point (acknowledgements issue; it seems to be 
> entity-included so a rebuild should fix it).
>
> Unless I hear otherwise, I'll regard this note as complete.  Note that 
> the major change, in this revision, is drastic reduction of the 
> Introduction text, per JJM, but adding an explanation of the genesis 
> of this note there as well.  If you have a moment, take a look at that 
> part.
>
> Amy!
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