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Re: Web Services Core Working Group Charter

From: Jacek Kopecky <jacek.kopecky@deri.org>
Date: Tue, 22 May 2007 23:51:57 +0200
To: Philippe Le Hegaret <plh@w3.org>
Cc: www-ws-cg@w3.org
Message-Id: <1179870717.17428.60.camel@localhost>

On Tue, 2007-05-22 at 17:29 -0400, Philippe Le Hegaret wrote:
> It now reads:
> [[
> Participation in the Web Services Core Working Group is open to the
> public. Any person interested in this topic is welcome to participate in
> this Interest Group. Individuals who wish to participate as Invited

s/Interest Group/Working Group/

> Experts (i.e., they do not represent a W3C Member) should refer to the
> policy for approval of Invited Experts. Invited Experts in this group
> are not granted access to Member-only information.
> 
> There are no minimum requirements for participation in this group.
> Participants are strongly encouraged to take advantage of frequent
> opportunities to review and comment on deliverables from other groups.
> 
> The Chair may call occasional meetings consistent with the W3C Process
> requirements for meetings.
> ]]

Are there two classes of participants from the public? Persons
interested in this topic, and individuals who wish to participate as
invited experts? Because first you say it's open, then you say there's
approval policy. Let me suggest a rephrasing, assuming that interested
people should either represent their Member employer or apply for being
an Invited Expert:

[[
Participation in the Web Services Core Working Group is open to the
public. Any person interested in this topic, in case they do not
represent a W3C Member, is welcome to apply to become an Invited Expert.
See the _policy for approval of Invited Experts_. Invited Experts in
this group are not granted access to Member-only information.

... the other two paragraphs unchanged
]]

Some singular/plural juggling in there to avoid he/she, according to my
preference.

Hope it helps,
Jacek
Received on Tuesday, 22 May 2007 21:52:11 GMT

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