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question about less technicality/dumbing down (was Re: Notes from Editors Breakout (by Chris W.))

From: Deborah McGuinness <dlm@ksl.Stanford.EDU>
Date: Thu, 09 Jan 2003 10:22:20 -0800
Message-ID: <3E1DBDDC.A18F0DC4@ksl.stanford.edu>
To: Jim Hendler <hendler@cs.umd.edu>
CC: webont <www-webont-wg@w3.org>

Thanks for the collective work.
The impact of the notes is a bit difficult to fully comprehend without
being there but one thing that I wanted to check in about was the note by
frank on the feature synopsis being less technical and the sniped note
below by jim below that i infer expands to "Feature Synopsis dumbed down to
overview".

Two things that I think are useful in the feature synopsis document are:
1 - a simple listing of the constructs grouped meaningfully
2 - the expanded form below for each construct:
    a sentence about what it means simply
    an example of it being used
    a sentence of the form:  "from this a reasoner can derive..."
    optional additional sentence if something is complicated

i am happy if the suggestion is to drop the technical notes like the cycles
reference that i had been previously asked to put in if that is what is
being meant by being less technical and being dumbed down.
I would be unhappy if your editing round on friday is going to drop the
examples however since that is an important aspect to the usefulness of the
document i believe.

also,
it also looks from frank's note that there may be a request for the roadmap
in the feature synopsis and in jim's note it looks like the roadmap may be
separate and on the web page.
I think the second makes the most sense.
I am willing to help generate the roadmap;  i just think having that as a
separate guide to reading is preferable to putting it in the feature
synopsis document

d

Jim Hendler wrote:

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> FS dumbed down to OV
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