validator/htdocs feedback.html,1.16.2.3,1.16.2.4

Update of /sources/public/validator/htdocs
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv2982

Modified Files:
      Tag: validator-0_6_0-branch
	feedback.html 
Log Message:
Grammar fixes from Andrew Robinson and some from yours truly.

Index: feedback.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/validator/htdocs/feedback.html,v
retrieving revision 1.16.2.3
retrieving revision 1.16.2.4
diff -u -d -r1.16.2.3 -r1.16.2.4
--- feedback.html	20 Aug 2003 21:20:41 -0000	1.16.2.3
+++ feedback.html	29 Apr 2004 06:27:39 -0000	1.16.2.4
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
   <dt>If your page doesn't validate, and you don't know why, or
       you have a question about
       <acronym title="HyperText Markup Language">HTML</acronym>
-      or validation</dt>
+      or validation:</dt>
   <dd>
     <p>
       First, check the <strong><a href="http://www.htmlhelp.com/faq/">Web
@@ -52,15 +52,15 @@
   <p>
     Each of these forums have plenty of experienced <acronym
     	title="HyperText Markup Language">HTML</acronym>
-		authors who are willing to share their expertise. (If you are
+		authors who are willing to share their expertise. If you are
 		commenting on a specific page, be sure to provide a
 		<acronym title="Universal Resource Locator">URL</acronym>
-		when you ask your question!)
+		when you ask your question!
   </p>
   </dd>
 
   <dt>If you are interested in helping to improve this
-    service, by writing code or just providing ideas,</dt>
+    service, by writing code or just providing ideas:</dt>
 
   <dd>
     <p>
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
       href="mailto:www-validator@w3.org">send it directly to the list</a>.
     </p>
   </dd>
-  <dt>If you want to report a bug or log a feature request.</dt>
+  <dt>If you want to report a bug or log a feature request:</dt>
   <dd>
     <p>
       The W3C Maintains a public bug tracking database known as <a

Received on Thursday, 29 April 2004 02:45:15 UTC