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Re: Proposed rewrite for section 3.1

From: Leo Sauermann <leo.sauermann@dfki.de>
Date: Sat, 22 Mar 2008 23:15:25 +0100
Message-ID: <47E584FD.8030101@dfki.de>
To: Jonathan Rees <jar@creativecommons.org>
CC: "Henry S. Thompson" <ht@inf.ed.ac.uk>, Richard Cyganiak <richard@cyganiak.de>, www-tag@w3.org, W3C SWEO IG <public-sweo-ig@w3.org>

It was Jonathan Rees who said at the right time 21.03.2008 13:48 the 
following words:
>
>
> On Mar 21, 2008, at 2:04 AM, Leo Sauermann wrote:
>> It is important to understand that using URIs, it is possible to 
>> identify both a thing (which exists outside of the web) and a web 
>> document describing the thing.
>
> I think you should say "which may exist" instead of "which exists", as 
> web documents are legitimate things and may themselves have 
> descriptions. (I think Tim said this on the call.) It's important at 
> each step to be consistent with the idea that there are lots of 
> things, and some but not all of those things are web documents.
ok, changed for the final note.
>
>> In HTTP, a 200 response code should be sent when a Web document has 
>> been accessed, a different setup is needed ...
>
> I think you are missing a word here, perhaps "because": "In HTTP, 
> because a 200 response code..."
it makes it sound a little better, done.

best
Leo

>
> Best
> Jonathan
>
>


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