"AWWW, 20040816 release, sections 1 and 2" seems editorial

In our 13 Sep telcon, I took an action to propose a
response to

"AWWW, 20040816 release, sections 1 and 2"
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-webarch-comments/2004JulSep/0059.html

I just looked them over for the 2nd time, and while I'm inclined
to incorporate many of the smaller suggestions, they seem editorial.

So I'm actually not proposing any substantive changes in response
to this comment after all.

Norm, is it straightforward for you to reply to this comment,
saying which comments you integrated and which ones you didn't?


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