WebArch draft, 21 Oct 2004

The webarch draft at

  http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041021/

represents the editor's best effort to incorporate Noah's suggested
improvements for dealing with "octet streams"[1], Roy's comments on
those changes[2][3][4], and a small amount of private discussion about
the wording of (what was) 2.4.1.

This draft is a delta off of the 19 Oct draft. A "diff" version from
the 19 Oct draft is avaliable:

  http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041021/diff-20041019.html

Structurally, the most significant change between Noah's draft and
this one is that the material Noah put in 2.4.1 has been moved down to
3.2. I believe that this is the direction Roy was suggesting at our
telcon.

This draft incorporates one change not related to Noah's text: I have
deleted the first paragraph of the abstract. Its presence was an
editorial oversight, it should have been deleted when I finished
drafting the paragraph that replaces it (the one that is the second
paragraph in the abstract in the 19 Oct draft).

And yes, the experimental PDF[5] is there too.

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/2004Oct/0047.html
[2] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/2004Oct/0060.html
[3] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/2004Oct/0106.html
[4] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/2004Oct/0107.html
[5] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041021/webarch.pdf

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Norman.Walsh@Sun.COM / XML Standards Architect / Sun Microsystems, Inc.
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