RE: comment on PR-webarch-20041105/ re identification from Miles, AJ (Alistair) on 2004-12-03 (www-tag@w3.org from December 2004)

From: Miles, AJ (Alistair) <A.J.Miles@rl.ac.uk>
Date: Fri, 3 Dec 2004 13:58:42 -0000
To: 'Chris Lilley' <chris@w3.org>, "'www-tag@w3.org'" <www-tag@w3.org>
Message-ID: <F5839D944C66C049BDB45F4C1E3DF89D18DAE7@exchange31.fed.cclrc.ac.uk>

> 
> I agree that 2.3.2 is too informal and should be clarified, 
> perhaps like
> this
> 
> '... there are two resources: a report of "the current weather in
> Oaxaca" and of "the of weather in Oaxaca on 1 August 2004". The Oaxaca
> weather site assigns two URIs to these two different resources.'

I would put:

'... there are two resources: "a report on the current weather in Oaxaca"
and "a report on the weather in Oaxaca on 1 August 2004". The Oaxaca weather
site assigns two URIs to these two different resources.'

Alistair.

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