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Re: Proposed text for 3.6.3 Supporting Navigation

From: Etan Wexler <ewexler@stickdog.com>
Date: Tue, 10 Aug 2004 15:41:25 -0700
To: www-tag@w3.org
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Chris Lilley wrote to <mailto:www-tag@w3.org> on 10 August 2004 in "Re: 
Proposed text for 3.6.3 Supporting Navigation" 
(<mid:1408474571.20040810220756@w3.org>):

>>>   Dirk goes to http://mymap.example.org, locates the museum, and 
>>> mails
>>>   the URI
>>> http://mymap.example.org/geo?sessionID=765345;userID=Dirk to
>>>   Nadia. Dirk reads Nadia's email and is able to follow the link to 
>>> the
>>>   map. Nadia reads Dirk's email, follows the link, and receives an
>>> error
>>>   message 'No such session/user'. She has start again from
>>>   http://mymap.example.org and find the museum location once more.
>
> EW>  From the W3C Manual of Style [MANUAL]:
>
> EW> First person pronouns ("I," "we") which are hard to translate 
> should
> EW> not be used in the text of examples. See the email message 
> "Personal
> EW> pronouns in specifications" [PRONOUNS]. Avoid "my" and "me" in 
> examples
> EW> (e.g., use "userResource" and not "myResource").
>
> Okay, s/She/Nadia

I was unclear. The problem is the domain label "mymap". Could the label 
"travel" replace "mymap"?

-- 
Etan Wexler.
Received on Tuesday, 10 August 2004 22:43:42 GMT

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