I would like to remove the redundant bits and compress the status of this document section so that it doesn't kill so many trees. Patch is below. ....Roy Index: webarch.html =================================================================== RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2001/tag/webarch/webarch.html,v retrieving revision 1.159 diff -u -r1.159 webarch.html --- webarch.html 18 Sep 2003 19:17:02 -0000 1.159 +++ webarch.html 23 Sep 2003 21:15:50 -0000 @@ -103,7 +108,10 @@ <p>This document has been developed by W3C's <a href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/">Technical Architecture Group -(TAG)</a> (<a href="http://www.w3.org/2001/07/19-tag">charter</a>).</p> +(TAG)</a> (<a href="http://www.w3.org/2001/07/19-tag">charter</a>). +Please send comments on this document to the public W3C TAG mailing list +<a href="mailto:www-tag@w3.org">www-tag@w3.org</a> (<a +href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/">archive</a>).</p> <p>This draft is an Editor's Draft and some new content has not yet been reviewed by the TAG. The primary changes in this draft concern @@ -111,14 +119,16 @@ teleconference</a>, review comments from Tim Bray, and revised text from Norm Walsh for section 4. A complete <a href="/2001/tag/webarch/changes">list of changes</a> since the -previous Working Draft is available on the Web.</p> +previous Working Draft is available on the Web. +This draft includes some editorial notes and references to open <a +href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/ilist">TAG issues</a>. These do not +represent all open issues in the document. They are expected to disappear +from future drafts.</p> <p>The TAG has published a number of <a href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/findings">findings</a> that address specific architecture issues. Parts of those findings may appear in -subsequent drafts. Please also consult the <a -href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/ilist">list of issues</a> under -consideration by the TAG.</p> +subsequent drafts.</p> <p>This document is intended to inform discussions about issues of Web architecture. Where current practice conflicts with this document, @@ -127,25 +137,14 @@ fill in gaps in published specifications or may call attention to known weaknesses in those specifications.</p> -<p>This draft includes some editorial notes and also references to open <a -href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/ilist">TAG issues</a>. These do not -represent all open issues in the document. They are expected to disappear -from future drafts.</p> - <p>Publication as a Working Draft does not imply endorsement by the W3C Membership. This is a draft document and may be updated, replaced or obsoleted by other documents at any time. It is inappropriate to cite this -document as other than "work in progress."</p> - -<p>The latest information regarding <a rel="disclosure" href="/2001/tag/disclosures">patent +document as other than "work in progress." +The latest information regarding +<a rel="disclosure" href="/2001/tag/disclosures">patent disclosures related to this document</a> is available on the Web.</p> -<p>Please send comments on this document to the public W3C TAG mailing list -<a href="mailto:www-tag@w3.org">www-tag@w3.org</a> (<a -href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/">archive</a>).</p> - -<p>A <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/">list of current W3C Recommendations and -other technical documents</a> can be found at the W3C Web site.</p> </div> <div class="section">Received on Tuesday, 23 September 2003 17:38:38 GMT
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