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Arch Doc: 18 Sep: status

From: Roy T. Fielding <fielding@apache.org>
Date: Tue, 23 Sep 2003 14:23:07 -0700
Cc: www-tag@w3.org
To: "Ian B. Jacobs" <ij@w3.org>
Message-Id: <1FF97B11-EE0C-11D7-869B-000393753936@apache.org>
I would like to remove the redundant bits and compress the status of
this document section so that it doesn't kill so many trees.

Patch is below.

....Roy


Index: webarch.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2001/tag/webarch/webarch.html,v
retrieving revision 1.159
diff -u -r1.159 webarch.html
--- webarch.html	18 Sep 2003 19:17:02 -0000	1.159
+++ webarch.html	23 Sep 2003 21:15:50 -0000
@@ -103,7 +108,10 @@
 
 <p>This document has been developed
 by W3C's <a href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/">Technical Architecture Group
-(TAG)</a> (<a href="http://www.w3.org/2001/07/19-tag">charter</a>).</p>
+(TAG)</a> (<a href="http://www.w3.org/2001/07/19-tag">charter</a>).
+Please send comments on this document to the public W3C TAG mailing list
+<a href="mailto:www-tag@w3.org">www-tag@w3.org</a> (<a
+href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/">archive</a>).</p>
 
 <p>This draft is an Editor's Draft and some new content has not yet
 been reviewed by the TAG. The primary changes in this draft concern
@@ -111,14 +119,16 @@
 teleconference</a>, review comments from Tim Bray, and revised text
 from Norm Walsh for section 4. A complete <a
 href="/2001/tag/webarch/changes">list of changes</a> since the
-previous Working Draft is available on the Web.</p>
+previous Working Draft is available on the Web.
+This draft includes some editorial notes and references to open <a
+href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/ilist">TAG issues</a>. These do not
+represent all open issues in the document. They are expected to disappear
+from future drafts.</p>
 
 <p>The TAG has published a number of <a
 href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/findings">findings</a> that address
 specific architecture issues. Parts of those findings may appear in
-subsequent drafts.  Please also consult the <a
-href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/ilist">list of issues</a> under
-consideration by the TAG.</p>
+subsequent drafts.</p>
 
 <p>This document is intended to inform discussions about issues of Web
 architecture. Where current practice conflicts with this document,
@@ -127,25 +137,14 @@
 fill in gaps in published specifications or may call attention to
 known weaknesses in those specifications.</p>
 
-<p>This draft includes some editorial notes and also references to open <a
-href="http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/ilist">TAG issues</a>. These do not
-represent all open issues in the document. They are expected to disappear
-from future drafts.</p>
-
 <p>Publication as a Working Draft does not imply endorsement by the W3C
 Membership. This is a draft document and may be updated, replaced or
 obsoleted by other documents at any time. It is inappropriate to cite this
-document as other than "work in progress."</p>
-
-<p>The latest information regarding <a rel="disclosure" href="/2001/tag/disclosures">patent
+document as other than "work in progress."
+The latest information regarding
+<a rel="disclosure" href="/2001/tag/disclosures">patent
 disclosures related to this document</a> is available on the Web.</p>
 
-<p>Please send comments on this document to the public W3C TAG mailing list
-<a href="mailto:www-tag@w3.org">www-tag@w3.org</a> (<a
-href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/">archive</a>).</p>
-
-<p>A <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/">list of current W3C Recommendations and
-other technical documents</a> can be found at the W3C Web site.</p>
 </div>
 
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