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Re: Arch Doc: 18 September 2003 Editor's Draft

From: Norman Walsh <Norman.Walsh@Sun.COM>
Date: Fri, 19 Sep 2003 18:19:05 -0400
To: www-tag@w3.org
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Technical comments through section 2.

In section 2.6, I don't much like the ambiguity example immediately
after the "URI ambiguity" good practice. It feels to me like it's
trying to demonstrate not only the ambiguity problem, but it's also
trying to prejudice the httpRange-14 question by hinting that the
problem is using the HTTP URIs of the corporations to identify the
corporations.

The Moby Dick paragraph that follows also seems a little stranded. It
makes a bunch of statements about what the URI might identify, but
doesn't go on to say anything about what those statements mean or what
the creator should do about it.

Everything else through Section 2 looks ok. Fantastic.

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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