Re: Japan F2F Minutes

On Dec 2, 2003, at 6:51 AM, Williams, Stuart wrote:

> I know that we approved out F2F minutes [1] yesterday - however, I've
> noticed that they are littered with a number of haiku. I don't think 
> they
> really formed a part of our meeting and should probably be struck from 
> the
> record.

I'm OK with the Haikus, but

Take this URI
Representation is yours
If you dereference

has the syllables wrong, which will just not do.  Last line should be 
"on dereference"

Circles and Arrows
Show so much. If only
I were artistic

needs a "would" in front of 2nd line, same reason