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Revised introduction/abstract for Arch Doc

From: Ian B. Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
Date: 13 Aug 2003 17:33:45 -0400
To: www-tag@w3.org
Message-Id: <1060810425.2780.166.camel@seabright>

TAG,

I have redrafted the Arch Doc's abstract and first part
of the introduction (from 1 Aug draft) based on comments 
from Tim Bray and Dan Connolly. It would be helpful if
Dan, Tim Bray, and Roy in particular were to review this 
text to see if it meets their needs.

I have attempted to take into account all of TB's and
DC's comments about the document, while preserving
RF's structure and much of his language.

I think it might make for faster convergence if folks
who are not TAG participants withhold comment until
the next Editor's Draft, which I hope will reflect
greater consensus among TAG participants.

Thank you,

 - Ian


[1] http://www.w3.org/2003/08/webarch-intro-20030813.html
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