Re: SVG12: when vs why discard

On Monday, April 18, 2005, 12:59:01 AM, Bjoern wrote:


BH> Dear Scalable Vector Graphics Working Group,

BH>   In
BH> http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/WD-SVGMobile12-20050413/struct.html for
BH> the definition of the 'discard' element,

BH> [...]
BH>   The 'discard' element itself can be discarded. It is discarded at the
BH>   earliest: soon after its target element has been discarded or because
BH>   it is the target of an other 'discard' element.
BH> [...]

BH> This mixes when and why, please change the document to only discuss when
BH> at this point.

Can you suggest a suitable rewording of the sentence? (or a couple of
sentences to replace it).



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 Chris Lilley                    mailto:chris@w3.org
 Chair, W3C SVG Working Group
 W3C Graphics Activity Lead