- From: Jonathan Watt <jonathan.watt@strath.ac.uk>
- Date: Sun, 12 Sep 2004 20:35:56 +0100 (BST)
- To: www-svg@w3.org
Hi, Here are some corrections for errors in the wording found in the HTML version of the document at http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-SVGMobile12-20040813/ 3. Data Types ------------- > SVGT supports<color> Need a space before "<color>". 4. Document Structure --------------------- > <svg:svg width="4cm" height="8cm" version="1.2" baseProfile="tiny" > <svg:ellipse cx="2" cy="4" rx="2" ry="1" /> Need a line break in the source before the <elipse> element. 5. Styling ---------- > SVGT support subsets... I think that should be "supports" 8. Text ------- > The path element is not a supported as a child of flowRegion. I guess that should be "The path element is not supported as a child of flowRegion." > The rx and ry attributes are not supported on <rect> elements as children of a 'flowRegion' element How about "...elements that are children..." or something other than "as". > SVG Tiny 1.2 supports the 'editable' attrubute on 'text' elements which have no element children. Should be attribute, not attrubute. 9. Painting: Filling, Stroking and Marker Symbols ------------------------------------------------- > SVGT support filling and stroking... Should be "supports". > SVGT 1.2 adds support for the following rendering properties: shape-rendering, text-rendering, and image-rendering. color-rendering was already supported in SVGT 1.2. I think you mean "...was already supported in SVGT 1.1.", not 1.2. > SVGT 1.2 supports the a subset of the 'vector-effect' property defined in SVG 1.2. Should be "SVGT 1.2 supports a subset...". 17. Animation ------------- > 1. SVGT allows the language features to support animation through scripting and UDOM are available in SVGT. This should be rephrased so it doesn't use both "allows" and "are available". > SVGT 1.2 supports the 'snapShotTime' attribute as defined the SVG 1.2 Should be "...defined in SVG 1.2". Regards, Jonathan
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