[css3-fonts] Appendix A copyedits from fantasai on 2013-05-23 (www-style@w3.org from May 2013)

From: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>
Date: Thu, 23 May 2013 21:03:29 +0800
To: "www-style@w3.org" <www-style@w3.org>
Message-ID: <519E13A1.2040000@inkedblade.net>

http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-fonts/#platform-props-to-css

   # underlying font formats used; they can be used

Think it would be better to split this sentence...

   #  stored for different locales but Microsoft recommends fonts

s/locales/locales,/

   # don't have this limitation, the family name is used

Run-on. Suggest s/,/&mdash;/

   # The bold face of the Gill Sans family

Prepend "For example"

   # for a given face but the Postscript name

s/face/face,/

   # to lookup a face while on Mac OS X

s/face/face,/

~fantasai

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