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Minor comments for CR-css-mobile-20020725

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 7 Feb 2003 21:57:19 -0800
Message-Id: <p05111b02ba6a4c2a7e09@[192.168.123.158]>
To: www-style@w3.org

Hello,

These are minor editorial comments for your CSS Mobile Profile 1.0
Candidate Recommendation [1]. Pardon the repetition from TV module
comments sent earlier to this list.

For the status section (most of them will go away):
s/Status of this document/Status of This Document/
s/member-only link/Member-only link/
s/2001 October 24/24 October 2001/
s/CR Review/CR review/
s/web browser/Web browser/
s/UA/user agent (UA)/ (in the first occurrence)
s/the exit criteria is met/the exit criteria are met/

In Acknowledgments:
s/XForms working group/XForms Working Group/
s/members of the CSS working group/participants in the CSS Working Group/
(to match the Process Document, see
http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process-20010719/groups.html#GroupsWG)

"MP-UA MUST" is hard to read. RFC 2119 key words can be marked up
like this:
http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#RFCs

Normative references should point to dated specs. Here is the guideline:
http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#References

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/CR-css-mobile-20020725

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch           http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/
mailto:lesch@w3.org               tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)    http://www.w3.org/
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