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Comments for WD-css-mobile-20010129

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 8 Feb 2001 00:42:21 -0800
Message-Id: <p05010413b6a80888b0df@[204.210.33.45]>
To: www-style@w3.org
Here are very minor comments for your CSS Mobile Profile 1.0 Last
Call Working Draft [1], to use or not, as you see fit.

In Status of this document, W3C organizations and maturity levels can
be capitalized as they are in the Process document: working group ->
Working Group, last call -> Last Call, style activity -> Style
Activity, working draft -> Working Draft.
(see http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/)

RFC 2119 can be a reference, and section 2 could say:
"...The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL
     NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED",  "MAY", and
     "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described
     in [RFC2119]."
If you don't want to use the RFC, then those words need definitions.
(see http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt)

HTML Tidy (or another tool) with indentation off will remove leading
spaces in the source. This will reduce the file size by about 10%.
(see http://www.w3.org/People/Raggett/tidy/)

 From here down, a section number is followed by a quote and then a
suggestion.

TOC 6. (the heading is right) and 6. list item 2
Inheritence
Inheritance

1. par. 1
Cascading Style Sheets, level 2 (CSS2) specification
Cascading Style Sheets, level 2 (CSS2) specification [CSS2]
(Link the first occurrence.)

1. last par. needs an ending period.

2. list item 5 and 5. list item 6
HTML 4.0 [HTML40]
HTML 4.01 [HTML4]
and the former needs a link [<a href="#ref-html4">HTML4</a>]

3. par. 1
In addition to these selectors,
[I am trying to find a good place to state the obvious in prose, that
the selectors and properties marked "Yes" are in the mobile profile.
This might be the place?]
In addition to the selectors marked "Yes" in the CSS Mobile column,

3. E
(i.e., and element of type E)
(i.e., an element of type E)

3. E F
descendent (twice)
descendant
Though both spellings are correct, CSS1 and CSS2 use the second.
(see http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-CSS2/selector.html#descendant-selectors)

3. E:lang(c)
The :lang() pseudo-classe
The :lang() pseudo-class

3. div.warning
The same as div[class!="warning"]
The same as div[class="warning"]

4. 'list-style-type'
upper-alpha ,none
upper-alpha, none

7. par. 1
stylesheets
style sheets

A. CSS2
et.al.
et al.

A. CSS1
17 December 1996, revised 11 January 1999

A. CSS1
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-CSS1-961217.html
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-CSS1

A. [HTML4]
"HTML 4.0 Specification"
HTML 4.01 Specification

In A., all three references can say they are W3C Recommendations.
Also, the titles should be links.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-css-mobile-20010129/

Best wishes for your project,

-- 
Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org  tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/
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