- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Sun, 10 Jun 2001 23:50:11 -0700
- To: www-smil@w3.org
Congratulations on your SMIL 2.0 Proposed Recommendation [1]. It looks very nice! Here are the results of spell-checking. I will try to send more comments after reading. Below a section number is followed by a quote and then a suggestion. Table of Contents 7.10 Appendicies 7.10 Appendices 3.2.3 par. 14 remians remains 3.2.5 Similarily Similarly 3.5 BasicAnimaion BasicAnimation Globally in chapter 3 Bezier Bézier or Bézier 3.7.4 path last par. attrtibute attribute 3.9.1 twice langauge language 4.2.2 systemComponent mpeg MPEG 6.4 sourcePlaystate precendence precedence 6.4 accesskey Keystroke-actived Keystroke-activated 8.4 example fonctionalities functionalities Chapter 10 has several missing spaces: descriptionwill ofendsync theelement theseq isresolved synchronizationbehavior timecontainer (unless you mean timeContainer) isthe madeactive describedin theelement playnormally anerror ofpar internet Internet 11.1.4 progess progress 12.6.1 Are you sure you want to call this "horzRepeat" and not "horizRepeat"? Appendix E. Marja-RiittaKoivunen Marja-Riitta Koivunen [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/PR-smil20-20010605/ Best wishes for your project,
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