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minor errors in WD-rdf-primer-20030905

From: <Sven.Hartrumpf@fernuni-hagen.de>
Date: Fri, 10 Oct 2003 10:41:43 +0200 (CEST)
Message-Id: <20031010.104143.74724679.Sven.Hartrumpf@FernUni-Hagen.de>
To: www-rdf-comments@w3.org
Hi all.

Here are some small errors:

made affect ->
may affect

property interpret ->
properly interpret

may not used ->
may not be used

as normatively defined in ->
are normatively defined in

provides no additional meaning that such a program can directly use ->
? the object referred to by "such a program" is unclear and very remote

month, day, and year ->
(illogical order; I know: some don't like logic :-) )

later in this section). ->
later in this section.)

in explaining the example). ->
in explaining the example.)

Greetings
Sven

Received on Friday, 10 October 2003 05:00:55 GMT

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