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minor typos in PR-rdf-schema-19990303

From: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
Date: Mon, 13 Dec 1999 19:50:58 -0800
Message-Id: <l03110704b47b672022a9@[24.30.151.160]>
To: www-rdf-comments@w3.org
Here are a few minor typos in the RDF Schema PR [1]. They are so minor that
I hesitate to mention them.

Reserved words, keywords, and examples could be regularized in CODE. In its
prose, this version of the specification uses single quotes, double quotes,
EM, CODE, or a leading capital letter, all at unpredictable times. I did
not enumerate candidates for regularization in this report.

"Sub-class" or "subclass" and "super-class" or "superclass" could be
hyphenated (or not) the same in each instance.

"Make sense" is used both in single and double quotes. I'm not sure which
is correct.

From this point, a section number and a paragraph number are followed by a
quote and my correction. Comments are in brackets [].

1. par 1
areas; for example:
areas, for example:

1. par 5
(e.g.
(e.g.,
[twice]

1.1.2 par 2
'schemas'
schemas
[not sure]

Resource
resource

1.2.1 par 2
(eg. caches)
(e.g., caches)

2.1 par 3
ways. e.g.,
ways - e.g.,

2.1.1 par 1
rectangle, a
rectangle; a
or
rectangle. A

2.1.2 par 1
Resource
resource

Class
class

rest).
rest.) [or remove parentheses for this sentence]

2.2.3 par 1
Class
class

2.3.2.1 par 2
<code> rdf:type </code> of
<code>rdf:type</code> of

class (eg. 'Van'
class (e.g., 'Van'

<code> &lt;Van ID="v_323"/&gt; </code>
<code>&lt;Van ID="v_323"/&gt;</code>

Similarly,  <code> &lt;rdfs:Class ID="MiniVan"/&gt; </code>
Similarly, <code>&lt;rdfs:Class ID="MiniVan"/&gt;</code>

serialisation
serialization

2.3.3 par 1
An instance of rdf:Property
The property rdfs:subPropertyOf is an instance of rdf:Property
or
This property is an instance of rdf:Property

A property may have zero, one, or more properties that it is a
specialization of.
A property may be a specialization of zero, one, or more properties.

2.3.5 par 2
schema given
schema, given
[not sure]

2.3.5 par 3
(ie.,
(i.e.,

3. par 2
(e.g.
(e.g.,

3. par 3
behaviours
behaviors

3. last par
[rdf:value in Figure 3 (constraints.gif) has no range arrow.
I am not sure if that is on purpose.]

3.2 par 1
centimetres
centimeters

6. par 1
[URI is CODE once and plain text once; I'd choose one or the other.]

6.5 par 1
rdfs:domain
<code>rdfs:domain</code>

7. Example 2 par 2
characterise
characterize

specialised
specialized

decentralised
decentralized

Appendix A - Compact XML Serialization
serialisation
serialization


Reference
[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/PR-rdf-schema-19990303

Best of luck with your project,
--
Susan Lesch
susan@textet.com
http://www.textet.com/
Received on Monday, 13 December 1999 22:50:47 GMT

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