> "To download Amaya, go to the Amaya Website > and get the necessary software. > > Both of these sentences divulge too much of the > mechanics of getting the Amaya software. If you > want to call your reader to action, use something like: > > Get Amaya! I strongly disagree. "Get Amaya" should initiate a download dialogue rather than simply take the user to a page /about/ Amaya. The earlier wording, deprecated by the author, is (IMHO) a far better way of describing the required course of action. Philip Taylor, RHBNCReceived on Wednesday, 12 July 2006 16:15:04 GMT
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