- From: Olivier Thereaux <ot@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 27 Jul 2005 10:21:28 +0900
- To: Brian Huisman <bhuisman@greywyvern.com>
- Cc: www-qa@w3.org
On Tue, Jul 26, 2005, Brian Huisman wrote: > So, I rewrote the article from scratch. The text is shorter, even > though the article itself is physically longer due to some HTML code > examples I included. Hopefully the shorter length and inclusion of > examples and exclusion of a lot ;) of jargon will remove the > "lecturey" feel, and make it more like the "call to action" it was > meant to be. > > This is my first draft: <http://www.greywyvern.com/code/unordered-lists> I had a quick look at it: good draft. I think it is going in a much better direction than the older text. For those who lack context on the existing tip and would like to compare it to Brian's new draft: http://www.w3.org/QA/Tips/unordered-lists regards -- olivier
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