Hi Dom Thank you for putting this all together. Its good that we don't lose this information (from SpecGL) - it is good stuff. A few suggestions..... Scope and Goal - 1st paragraph s/analyses/analyzes/ remove 'two' - since it can be how much any number of implementations may vary remove ',' after the '-' s/distinguishes/presents/ 2nd paragraph remove the ',' after interoperability Structure of the document s/analyses/analyzes/ --lynneReceived on Sunday, 22 August 2004 19:46:45 GMT
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